OK, they haven’t landed They’ve just taken away one of my hero’s. Abduction is now on sale! This is my first attempt at sci-fi, and if you’ve been reading my blog on a regular basis you might remember when I was writing it, and I posted a bit on here for opinions.
I’m working on the sequel to it right now, it’ll be out in November. In fact, with TRANSPLANT I just restarted it, because I realized the start was too much of a recap of what happened in ABDUCTION, (this is my first sequel too) so I restarted it with some action. I think starting stories in the middle of action is pretty good.
What do you think?
For a look at Abduction just click on the title. and here’s a tiny sneek peek at how TRANSPLANT starts.
Seem interesting?
Breathing hard, blood pumping, and heart pounding Max Cooper eyed the alien in front of him. Her petit height and delicate features might fool some people into underestimating her, but not him. He saw the controlled tightness of her lean muscles as she slowly circled him, and knew that she could spring into action in less time than it took him to blink. At least she wasn’t wearing her usual assortment of weapons.
Then again, he thought, the weapons would never distract him as much as her naked swaying breasts and ripe nipples were.
The second he glanced at the nipples in question he knew he’d made a mistake. Almost faster than he could see, she was on him. Literally.
Firm thighs wrapped around his waist and damp heat rub against his belly as he wrapped his arms around her tiny waist and stumbled back, struggling to keep his footing.
“Mine Max,” she growled. “You are mine, and am not willing to share.”
UPDATE:The first review for Abduction is up now! Check it out!
Love both the teasers, Sasha! I haven’t hoped over to read the review yet, but I’ll be doing that now. And I’ll probably end up with TWO Sasha White ebooks to read on my vacation!
by Lynn Daniels July 10th, 2005 at 8:29 pmYay! Lynn!! You should be safe, I try to make sure all my stories are quit different, and ABDUCTION is really short!
by Sasha July 10th, 2005 at 8:37 pm"OK, they haven’t landed, they’ve just taken away one of my hero’s."
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You have seriously laughable problems with writing. Thank God there are people like editors, hmm?
by Jordan Stalker July 10th, 2005 at 10:14 pmJordan~ And people like you that use being rude to others as a way to make yourself feel better. :)
by Sasha July 10th, 2005 at 10:25 pmJordan, that was viciously rude. There was no need for it. If you wanted to point out a gramatical error posted on the blog, all you had to do was email Sasha–not ridicule her. A blog is not a literary dissertation, it’s about social interaction. A couple of typos/grammatical errors are easily overlooked & forgiven. Take a chill pill.
by jaq July 10th, 2005 at 10:36 pmI’m echoing what Jaq said. Your comment was nasty and unnecessary.
by raine July 10th, 2005 at 11:17 pmAnd obviously you’re so proud of your own superior intellect, you chose to hide behind a ridiculous pseudonym (at least, we HOPE that’s what it is).
If you need attention this badly, may I recommend getting a life or career of your own?
Thanks, ladies. You my Pals!!! :P
by Sasha July 10th, 2005 at 11:24 pmShame on you Jordan! That was so not necessary!
But if you feel the need to leave nasty comments at least have the balls to leave a website address or email or better yet, send us some of your own writing to critique.
Cece
by Cece July 11th, 2005 at 8:57 am~the critique partner from hell :plain: