Archive for September, 2004



Tuesday, September 7th, 2004
Comma’s.

I think they are forever going to the bane of my existence as a writer. You see, I trust my grammar check.

Well, I used to. :P

If you’ve been following my blog then you know that bad grammar was the main complaints in my two RWA contest entries. All the judges have commented on the same thing. . .comma usage.

I get that I don’t use them enough, but after doing the interactive exercises here, that my cp Cece introduced me too, I can honestly say that a couple of those judges inserted way too many in my entries.

Here’s to hoping that my newly acquired knowledge, and lack of trust in grammar check, helps me sell my newly revised romance novel.

Ok . . .it’s only half revised, but I’m gettin there! :hehe:

Monday, September 6th, 2004
Good News!!

I’ve tried to wait, but I can’t stand it anymore. :crazy:

My friend and cp, Sylvia Day is a well deserved Brava contest Finalist!!!

I’m so happy for her! Check out her entry here. It’s the sixth one! The one with the Pirate!! *drool*

Monday, September 6th, 2004
Me? Explicit?

:O I could be wrong, but I think it’s safe to assume, after reading a post on Lori Foster’s message board that my entry to her Brava Novella contest will not final.

Lori Says:
You know, since many of you asked, and I’m reading entries right now, I thought I’d tell some of the things that take me out of a submission. These are BROAD examples - not taken from any one entry, okay? I would never do that.
But if we bring up problem areas, then maybe we can talk about them in a constructive way, and get input from some of the other pubs here. Whatdya think?
I so hope this doesn’t offend anyone!
First, if I’m dropped right in the middle of a super explicit sex scene and I have no idea who these people are, how emotionally commited they might be to each other, or why they’re in that situation… well, I have nothing invested in the entry, so it doesn’t appeal to me. Also, anything too over the top, and no way can I have it posted on my message board anyway. Sorry!

Let me make this clear…this was not posted TO ME, but in general.
Like I said. . . I could be wrong…but my entry starts with a bit of an erotic dream the heroine is having…so I’m thinking you won’t be seeing it amongst the finalists. :P

P.S~ How do I get italics on this thing??? :plain:

Saturday, September 4th, 2004
Another Quiz

Not exactly the sexy sleek animal I was hoping for…but I do like the attributes!! :hehe:

HASH(0x8b2d7b8)
Heron’s Spirit Calls To You!
Heron’s Wisdom
Includes:

All aspects of diversity

Self-reliance

Boundaries

Exploration

Self-esteem

Balancing multiple tasks

Dignity

Animal Spirit Guides ~ Which One Calls To You?
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Friday, September 3rd, 2004
ARGHHH…

I just decided to focus on TDI in case it does well in the Brava contest…and I see on eHarlequin that they are having a pitch session with the editor from Silhouette Desire.

OK. Why is this making me pull my hair out? Because I was told that the novel I wrote last summer, and haven’t worked on since, should be a Desire. Who told me this? Someone from Harlequin that did a crit for me, (they have a critique service you can pay for). SO now I feel this is a good opportunity to pitch it and see what happens.

That means I know have 4 things to work on!!! :crazy:

Thursday, September 2nd, 2004
People.

OK this post isn’t about writing. It’s about waitressing. Or about being a good customer… a bit of both I guess. It’s a jumbled ramble..:hehe:

I’m shocked by the way some people think that food should take only 10 minutes from the time you order it to the time it gets to the table. I mean, I always assume they want it COOKED! And I would think being cooked FRESH is good thing too.:P

Next, if you’re going to complain about how long it takes…don’t lie to us or exaggerate. Computers are amazing things and nowadays all orders are tracked and timed…so trust me when I say, we KNOW how long it’s been since you ordered. SO telling us it’s been half an hour when it’s only been 15 minutes, does not make us want to rush to make things right for you…it just makes us think you’re arrogant, demanding and well, to be honest. . .stupid. :doze:

What is a reasonable amount of time for your food to take? It depends on what you order. I think 20 minutes is reasonable for most things. At our restaurant we strive to get all orders out in 20 minutes, but you have to remember, a Well Done steak takes a bit longer to cook than a plate of spaghetti.

If the kitchen is being slow, for whatever reason, or something is screwed up in your order…. being nice when you point this out to us will get you a much more satisfactory response (and probably discount) than being nasty. Trust me, I say this as a manager. The age of the customer ALWAYS being right . . . is gone.

What I would also like to see gone, is the attitude that waitresses or servers are people that are too uneducated or lazy to get a “real” job. Being a server is more than the person that has to smile the whole time she/he is bringing your meals, and drinks, and desserts, and condiments, to the table. They also are doing the same thing for a minimum of four other tables. And they’re the one that is clearing the tables of all that stuff they bring to you. And while all this is happening they are also dealing with the computers, the money, and the cooks. There are few jobs that encompass all the aspects of being a server and only those that have ever experienced it, can understand it. Well, some Mothers can probably understand it, even if they’ve never been employed as a server ;)

Ok, I’m climbing off my soapbox now. Have a nice day! :laugh:

Wednesday, September 1st, 2004
I’m nuts!

I’ve always said I would only ever work on one story at a time….yet somehow I have managed to get myself caught up in 3!! :crazy:
I have The Devil Inside ~ Half done novella.
Playtime~ A 1/4 done short story,(sort of erotic mystery)
and Angelo~ a just started darker short story with a bdsm theme.
But it’s back to TDI to finish it off…then I can move on… I guess I just had to get the others started so I wouldn’t lose them.

TDI is the one I entered in Lori Fosters Brava contest..it might be a good idea to finish it..Jsust in case it finals.