Comments on: Action http://www.sashawhite.net/blog/2004/08/20/action/ Romance with Heat, Erotica with Heart Wed, 07 Jan 2009 02:06:30 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.5 By: Sasha http://www.sashawhite.net/blog/2004/08/20/action/#comment-335 Sasha Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000 http://www.sashawhite.net/blog/?p=112#comment-335 I was just rereading this and noticed I started in 3rd person and switched to 1st. :crazy: Ok, I did say it was an excercise!! :laugh: I was just rereading this and noticed I started in 3rd person and switched to 1st. :crazy: Ok, I did say it was an excercise!! :laugh:

]]> By: Sylvia Day http://www.sashawhite.net/blog/2004/08/20/action/#comment-336 Sylvia Day Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000 http://www.sashawhite.net/blog/?p=112#comment-336 I'm intrigued. She's been tracking him a long time, why? Others are tracking him, why? What's his exploitable weakness? And why is his gaze unholy? Is there a bit of the supernatural at play here? You've drawn me in... I’m intrigued. She’s been tracking him a long time, why? Others are tracking him, why? What’s his exploitable weakness? And why is his gaze unholy? Is there a bit of the supernatural at play here? You’ve drawn me in…

]]> By: Larissa http://www.sashawhite.net/blog/2004/08/20/action/#comment-337 Larissa Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000 http://www.sashawhite.net/blog/?p=112#comment-337 LOL--don't give up! You've got a great start! LOL–don’t give up! You’ve got a great start!

]]> By: cece http://www.sashawhite.net/blog/2004/08/20/action/#comment-338 cece Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000 http://www.sashawhite.net/blog/?p=112#comment-338 Nice and creepy girl!!!! Nice and creepy girl!!!!

]]> By: dani http://www.sashawhite.net/blog/2004/08/20/action/#comment-339 dani Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000 http://www.sashawhite.net/blog/?p=112#comment-339 I am your biggest fan!! think that the "action" story was really good, left me wanting more. That is what I like about your writing. I want to read More!! :D :D I am your biggest fan!! think that the "action" story was really good, left me wanting more. That is what I like about your writing. I want to read More!! :D :D

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